Six Sentence Sunday – 12/4/11

Today is #sixsunday where writers share six sentences from their work. I’ll share a snippet from my time-travel romance WIP. I currently have this out to Beta readers for feedback and hope to be in a position to query for agents in the new year. Here’s my working query hook for it: Isabelle Rochon has met the man of her dreams. There’s only one problem: he lives in a different century. 

This is in the first chapter and she’s at a reenactment ball, but everyone’s starting to be a little too into it. She’s just met the hero who is asking for the honor of an introduction:

May I have the honor? Really? Isabelle was starting to like the whole reenactment thing, but this seemed a tad over the top. So he was handsome. Well, okay, drool-worthy. Maybe she would cut him some slack on the over-acting bit then.

She ends up nicknaming him Lord Drool-Worthy shortly after this, which I’m seriously thinking of making the title…

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Have a great Sunday!

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16 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday – 12/4/11

  1. Ranae Rose December 4, 2011 at 8:31 am #

    It would be kind nice if men still talked like that, huh? Instead we’re too likely to get something like: “Hey, baby.” *totally obvious butt check-out* “Can I get yo number?”

    Ah, the good old days… LOL

    • angela quarles December 4, 2011 at 10:15 am #

      I know, right? Sigh….

      • Sadie Hart December 4, 2011 at 10:43 am #

        LOL It *would* be nice to see some more chivalry these days! I’d cut Lord Drool-Worthy some slack for the over acting too.

  2. Gayle Ramage December 4, 2011 at 11:16 am #

    Lord Drool-Worthy, lol! Love this! More next week, please!

  3. Julia Rachel Barrett December 4, 2011 at 12:45 pm #

    Great SSS! You’re new to me, but not for long!

  4. K.E. Saxon December 4, 2011 at 5:05 pm #

    Oh, this is going to be good! Boy is she in for a shock, huh? Great six!

  5. Karla December 4, 2011 at 7:44 pm #

    Great hook! :)

  6. Siobhan Muir December 4, 2011 at 8:04 pm #

    Oh I’m already intrigued and I LOVE time travel romances. Great six, Angela! :)

  7. Cara Michaels December 4, 2011 at 9:19 pm #

    *Sigh*… I like the hero already. Very nice 6, Angela. Lovely to meet a fellow Browncoat!

  8. Cate Masters December 5, 2011 at 11:43 am #

    Too funny, Lord Drool-Worthy. Love TT.

  9. Heather Boyd December 5, 2011 at 4:04 pm #

    Great six. Love the humor!

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