Six Sentence Sunday – 10/14/12

I’m back after almost a month! I missed y’all!

NEWS: I landed an agent! I actually had three offers! I want to thank all of you who have regularly commented since I started doing #sixsunday almost a year ago. Your support kept me thinking positive even when I faced rejections! Some of you even helped Beta! THANK YOU! This doesn’t necessarily mean a publisher will buy it, but I’m one step closer….

Today’s Six Sunday is from STEAM ME UP, RAWLEY, my steampunk romance set in Mobile, AL. I’m skipping to the next day and we’re finally in Rawley’s POV. He’s outside standing in the rain after calming an agitated horse and our heroine arrives, breathless (It’s been a while, but here’s a link to an earlier SSS entry where Rawley gave the heroine a scandalous peek at his neck when they first met the previous day, so as to put his reflections about his disheveled state in perspective):

Her hat, a frivolous contraption, sat at a jaunty angle on her head. His fingers itched to push it up to sit properly. Over all, she held a large yellow umbrella, protecting her from the blasted rain. He shoved fingers through his wet hair, inwardly cursing to find himself again in a disheveled state before her. The same unsettling feeling as yesterday overtook him, as if his body couldn’t determine if it was about to step off a cliff or fall into a luxuriant, buoyant cloud.

She stepped close, admitting him to her protected space.

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39 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday – 10/14/12

  1. Julie W. Trigg October 14, 2012 at 6:54 am #

    Love it!!!

  2. Donna Cummings October 14, 2012 at 7:50 am #

    Congrats again — I’m so thrilled for you. :) And I love this snippet. Great description, especially of his unsettled feelings!

  3. Cera duBois October 14, 2012 at 8:05 am #

    I’m so happy for you! Congrats on catching one of these elusive birds we call agents.

    Loved this six… Great job with the description.

  4. Jess Schira October 14, 2012 at 8:29 am #

    The last sentence made me laugh. Congrats on landing an agent, it’s awesome news, and you deserve it!

  5. Kristal Baird October 14, 2012 at 8:43 am #

    I so like how he worries what he looks like in front of her. That’s sweet.

  6. Joyce Scarbrough October 14, 2012 at 8:45 am #

    Congrats again on the agent coup, and glad you’re back to Six Sunday! Love how Rawley seems much too concerned with appearances since I have the feeling all that is going to change and he won’t be able to do a thing about it! 😉

  7. Sadie Hart October 14, 2012 at 9:03 am #

    Oh my gosh! Congrats Angela!!!! I love these two. :)

  8. Sarah W October 14, 2012 at 9:48 am #

    Oh, my! When a straightlaced man starts to feel flustered . . . that’s amore! 😀

  9. Callie Hutton October 14, 2012 at 10:05 am #

    Love his awkwardness at being disheveled in front of her. Good six. Congrats on the agent.

  10. Jessica Subject October 14, 2012 at 10:10 am #

    She doesn’t seem to mind his disheveled state. Nice six!

    And congrats on finding an agent!!! :)

  11. veronicascott October 14, 2012 at 11:02 am #

    Congratulations on the agent! I enjoyed the description, nice to have a glimpse into his train of thought – terrific six as always!

  12. ccwilliamsauthor October 14, 2012 at 11:33 am #

    Great 6, Angela, loved the diction!

  13. Carrie Crain October 14, 2012 at 11:41 am #

    OMG, Angela… mega congrats to you and the agent deal. You must be on cloud ten. I like your snippet, it flows nicely like a soft summer breeze.

  14. Cara Bristol October 14, 2012 at 11:43 am #

    Rich and descriptive. Very nice.

    Now…YAY for you!!!! How wonderful that you got and agent and had a choice. You’re going to go far!

  15. Owllady/Marcia October 14, 2012 at 11:43 am #

    Congratu-freaking-lations Angela! So exciting for you. I love the last line of this excerpt in particular. Great to see something from his perspective now.

  16. ellaquinnauthor October 14, 2012 at 11:46 am #

    He’s so cute. Congrats again on you agent.

  17. Sue October 14, 2012 at 11:50 am #

    Cliff or cloud – nice and I guess it bothers him that she always sees him in an untidy state

  18. Tory Michaels (@ToryMichaels) October 14, 2012 at 11:55 am #

    Nicely done on the offers. I knew it wouldn’t be long with as strong as Must Love Breeches is. And nice 6!

  19. K.E. Saxon October 14, 2012 at 12:17 pm #

    Love the way he perceives his body’s reaction to her. Great six, and CONGRATS on landing an agent!

  20. S. J. Maylee October 14, 2012 at 12:51 pm #

    There is so much to love here, I couldn’t pick just one! The descriptions are really something. I can see this scene. Well done and congrats again. 😀

  21. siobhanmuir October 14, 2012 at 1:09 pm #

    Nice set up. I like the last line and how it changes the atmosphere. Good six, Angela. :)

  22. Virginia Kelly October 14, 2012 at 1:26 pm #

    Congratulations on the agent! I haven’t visited your blog before, but your writing is beautiful. These six are wonderful. Great job. Oh, I live about an hour from Mobile.

  23. Karysa Faire October 14, 2012 at 2:26 pm #

    Congratulations, Angela! Very exciting news. :-) As always, your six are magnificent.

  24. Frank Fisher October 14, 2012 at 4:33 pm #

    Great overall description. And congrats on landing an agent! How did you do it? Curious to know, since I’ll be looking for one next year. Fun six!

    • Angela Quarles October 14, 2012 at 4:50 pm #

      Hi Frank, thanks! Click on the highlighted link in my announcement to bring you to the blog post where I talk about how I found my agent…

  25. Claire Gillian October 14, 2012 at 6:55 pm #

    I love his perception of her hat “at a jaunty angle”. Congrats on the agent!

  26. Kylie Scott October 14, 2012 at 7:01 pm #

    Congratulations again! So deserved after all your hard work! Great 6, your writing voice is fantastic.

  27. Gem October 14, 2012 at 7:22 pm #

    Congrats on acquiring an agent! Wonderful voice in this six.

  28. Lanise Brown October 14, 2012 at 7:41 pm #

    I love steampunk. This looks like a great read! 😀

  29. Lorraine Paton October 14, 2012 at 7:58 pm #

    Love your six! Congrats on your news! :)

  30. Heather Boyd October 14, 2012 at 8:48 pm #

    Fantastic news! Congrats. Lovely six this week too.

  31. Sandra Sookoo October 14, 2012 at 8:58 pm #

    Congrats on the agent :-)

  32. sueannbowlingauthor October 14, 2012 at 11:02 pm #

    Missed you and congratulations on the agent. Love Rawley embarrassed but his disarray.

  33. Carrie-Anne October 15, 2012 at 12:21 am #

    Congratulations on snagging an agent! I love your six, particularly the cloud imagery in the fifth line.

  34. Ryan Derham October 15, 2012 at 8:44 am #

    Love the last line and the description in general. Steampunk is fantastic! Congratulations on getting an agent!

  35. Elin Gregory October 15, 2012 at 1:11 pm #

    Congratulations!! Agents are scarce as hen’s teeth! Very well done.
    Nice six. too.

  36. J.M. Blackman October 16, 2012 at 5:38 am #

    I hope I sent you back and congratulatory email. It was my intention. If not, congratulations! I’m not surprised in the least that BREECHES has ben picked up. It was a wonderful read. Can’t wait to see it in print! As for your six, I love the mood and reserved nature that threads throughout these. Somehow that restraint makes these all the more alluring.

  37. Siren Star October 19, 2012 at 4:48 am #

    Congrats! And great six! I love that it is a steampunk story :)

  38. sarahballance October 28, 2012 at 11:25 am #

    This drew me right in. Awesome writing!

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