Six Sentence Sunday – 8/5/12

Today is #sixsunday where writers share six sentences from their work. 

NEWS: MUST LOVE BREECHES finaled in Georgia’s Maggie, and also Greater Seattle’s ECO contest! That makes 7 contest finals to-date!

Today’s Six Sunday I’m picking up roughly where we left off a month ago (!) with my steampunk romance STEAM ME UP, RAWLEY. Rawley has landed in a balloon, and his cravat has scandalously flown away during the landing. Adele is mesmerized by the glimpse of sexy neck and collarbone. I’m skipping a line or two where she notes with interest that he’s blushing. The first to speak is Rawley, who has caught her staring:

“Your father?”

She started. “Oh, yes, of course.”

“Nteech scrrrtch.”

Adele looked down. Loki tugged on Dr. Rawley’s trouser leg, his cravat waving in the monkey’s tiny fist like a flag of surrender.

As always I welcome constructive feedback. Thank you!

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26 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday – 8/5/12

  1. Donna Cummings August 5, 2012 at 7:35 am #

    Congrats on the new finals! You’re on fire. :) And I love Loki stealing the cravat. LOL

  2. L.j. Kentowski August 5, 2012 at 8:17 am #

    Congrats Angela!! That Loki is so devious 😉 Love it! Great 6!

  3. S. J. Maylee August 5, 2012 at 8:41 am #

    Throws confetti for the finals, that’s so cool. And Loki’s tiny fist, I can see it. Too cute.

  4. Owllady/Marcia August 5, 2012 at 9:17 am #

    Congrats, Angela! Cool six. I like how Loki pops up when we least expect him.

  5. Joyce Scarbrough August 5, 2012 at 9:25 am #

    Congrats on all your finals! Six more good ones this week!

  6. A.S. Fenichel August 5, 2012 at 9:36 am #

    LOL! Oh how I’ve missed you, Angela! Great six.

  7. Sue August 5, 2012 at 9:44 am #

    congrats on the finals. Hope you enjoyed the conference. Who’s surrendering lol

  8. Linda Morris (@LMorrisWriter) August 5, 2012 at 9:50 am #

    Bwaha, love the description of Loki waving the cravat. Congrats on the finals!

  9. Joanne Stewart August 5, 2012 at 10:00 am #

    Congrats on the contest final! I love the monkey!

  10. Monica Enderle Pierce August 5, 2012 at 10:12 am #

    Yes, congrats! I think that’s very noble of Loki to return the gentleman’s cravat. Such a helpful monkey.

  11. Carrie-Anne August 5, 2012 at 10:44 am #

    Congratulations on your finals! I love the image of Loki with the cravat.

  12. Kate August 5, 2012 at 10:53 am #

    That’s adorable! Rawley should just surrender now. Congratulations on the continued success of MLB. I told you so. 😉

  13. Cara Bristol August 5, 2012 at 11:15 am #

    “His cravat waving in the monkey’s tiny fist like a flag of surrender.” Like the analog. Congratulations on the finals.

  14. ellaquinnauthor August 5, 2012 at 11:21 am #

    Glad you’re back. Very cute six.

  15. J.M. Blackman August 5, 2012 at 11:53 am #

    Congrats on so many finals! That’s fantastic! And this is a great snippet. Glad you cans back to it. I just love Loki.

  16. Claire Gillian August 5, 2012 at 12:27 pm #

    Congrats on finaling!! Love that little flag of surrender.

  17. Elin Gregory August 5, 2012 at 1:43 pm #

    A monkey called Loki? So appropriate and very scary. :)

  18. Jenna Jaxon August 5, 2012 at 1:55 pm #

    Cute six! Monkeys are just cute, you know? Congrats on your finals!

  19. Teresa Cypher August 5, 2012 at 3:13 pm #

    Congratulations, Angela! Great six– love the ““Nteech scrrrtch.” Such a mischievous little Loki! :-)

  20. Corinne Davies August 5, 2012 at 3:49 pm #

    Love Steampunk!!! Great six and congratulations on finaling in the contest :)

  21. Jessi Gage August 5, 2012 at 4:29 pm #

    Very cute 6. Reminds me of Carl the monkey in Janet Evanovich’s Lizzie & Diesel series.

  22. Kylie Scott August 5, 2012 at 5:23 pm #

    Congratulations on the finals and GO LOKI!

  23. veronicascott August 5, 2012 at 6:08 pm #

    Loki totally took me by surprise, always fun when that happens in a book! Can’t wait to keep reading this, really enjoying it – my first steampunk! Excellent excerpt!

  24. sueannbowlingauthor August 5, 2012 at 7:49 pm #

    I love Loki.

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