Today’s my birthday, and in the spirit of the Hobbits, I’m going to give a birthday present to someone else!
I really don’t know if any of you would want this, but in case you do, here’s what it is: A detailed critique of your first 5 pages.
I’ll look at opening hook, possible weak sentences, instances of telling, ways you can go deeper in POV. I’ll mark that puppy up!
If you’re interested, comment below with your title, genre and a short blurb and I’ll pick one winner.
I’ll take comments until midnight CST June 7!